Wow gr8 work! thnx for the comments. i like the emotion in this, it was good 5/5

Great poem/song. Is there anyway I can use it in my band? 5/5 anyways...I hope you continue to write.

Hey darl lot of emotion in this poem. very touching i lke how uve worded it. good work. thank u for ur comment on my poem. meant alot xx

This had great rhythm I could almost hear the music. Just reading it I think it relied on please a little to much but as a song I see it working well.