Foolish

by Truest Lies   Jul 18, 2006


Your pain is foolish,
Said the angel,
Stretching her wings above me.

But it hurts so bad,
I replied,
When I feel the pain,
It almost feels like I had died.

You are weak,
Said she,
And her feathers swept around me.
Come, let me show you the real world,
For I want you to see.

No,
I am afraid of heights,
I said as she began to lift me up.

Fear not,
She replied,
For you are with me.

I clung on tightly,
As she swept up into the clouds,
I spotted my house,
And my parents among the crowds.

See there,
She pointed.
That child is starving.
See that dog,
Barking in pain?

And look,
A robin broke its wing,
And has fallen,
To lie frozen.

Look at that man,
Without any money,
His wife just threw him out,
With barely a suitcase,
And a goodbye shout.

Look at the blood,
That pools on the floor,
The dead soldiers lie still,
To be joined by more and more.

Look at the houses,
That were burnt,
And lay like dust on the floor.

I ask you,
Dear child,
Do you wish to see more?

No,
I replied,
And shielded my eyes.
No,
I have seen enough.

I opened me eyes,
And I was back on the ground.

Your pain is foolish,
Said the angel to me.

Yes, so it is,
I replied,
My eyes growing wide,
And then I wept,
Rather foolishly.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. Especially the soldier part, I was about ready to cry. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Wow that poem was excellent! My favorite stanza was the one with the soliders....! The flow was excellent I could not wait to finsih, great job!

    -AnnMarie

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    So true.. sometimes we get so wrapped up in our own lives we forget that there are people out there, so much worse off than us.. great work 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great poem, it is so beautiful that I can not even give you an advise to make it better, cause it is already so great.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Wow, that really opened my eyes a lot and made me see things that i have known were there but haven't really payed attention to them in awhile! but this poem made me see there is a lot more in life that i know! it was great i absolutely loved it! 5/5