by Truest Lies Jul 18, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Your pain is foolish, |
by Megann Lee
Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. Especially the soldier part, I was about ready to cry. Great job. |
by AnnMarie
Wow that poem was excellent! My favorite stanza was the one with the soliders....! The flow was excellent I could not wait to finsih, great job! |
by donna
So true.. sometimes we get so wrapped up in our own lives we forget that there are people out there, so much worse off than us.. great work 5/5 xx |
by Goran Rahim
A great poem, it is so beautiful that I can not even give you an advise to make it better, cause it is already so great. |
by Nelle
Wow, that really opened my eyes a lot and made me see things that i have known were there but haven't really payed attention to them in awhile! but this poem made me see there is a lot more in life that i know! it was great i absolutely loved it! 5/5 |