"Your pain is foolish"

i think that your poem was really well written...sometimes we make a big deal out of our problems, when there are other people a lot worse off. you described it well! great work, keep it up! 5/5

Wow, that really opened my eyes a lot and made me see things that i have known were there but haven't really payed attention to them in awhile! but this poem made me see there is a lot more in life that i know! it was great i absolutely loved it! 5/5

A great poem, it is so beautiful that I can not even give you an advise to make it better, cause it is already so great.

So true.. sometimes we get so wrapped up in our own lives we forget that there are people out there, so much worse off than us.. great work 5/5 xx

Wow that poem was excellent! My favorite stanza was the one with the soliders....! The flow was excellent I could not wait to finsih, great job!

-AnnMarie

Wow, that brought tears to my eyes. Especially the soldier part, I was about ready to cry. Great job.