Great poem and nice work.

jubilee

This has to be one of the best poems I have ever read. Excellent job. I love it. I love the style you set this up in. Good job.

>black&&blue

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work! Please check out mine if you get a chance.

Oh wow...ur very talented...keep on writing...u are very good...5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

You have realy done well... its amazing the way you can link the word without straighing from the story... AWSOME

Woah - write more poems alex - ur reeeeeeeaaaaallllllly good at it :P 5/5 xoxo