Comments : On The Edge

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Amazing imagery in this one. I loved how you described everything so perfectly. All the adjectives you put into your poem, the words were chosen well. It gave it such a morbid image. The ending was perfect to, the signal of death. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ryu

    Man did we have history.............