This poem is absolutely beautiful! Amazing job. I'm still confused as to why it doesnt have tons of comments. I love it!
xoxoxo Haley

This great. I like how you did 3 verse rhyme. It's hard to do because it limits your words and it also causes forced rhyme but you did good. 5/5
-Kakashi

I loved this one!
eveything about it was good, even the title
well done