Will you see

by Nelle   Jul 18, 2006


Things have changed and my life has been rearranged.
I wish I could turn back time I wish I could make you see.
You are a better part of me, you always take away my pain.
But, maybe this is the way it's meant to be.

You have left me here in my tears.
You have gave me something to fear.
How am i supposed to live with out you here.
I will be surprised if I make it through this year.

I love you, baby more then you know.
How come you can't see, this is not me.
I don't know who I have become or what I have done.
I need you here so we can be one.

I'm missing you more and more every day.
Maybe one day you will really see
The night it happens, you will be free
Because from that day on, you will know how much you truly mean to me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    HEY NELLE HOW YOU BEEN I MISS YOU I HAVENT TALKED TO YOU LATELY WELL ANYWAYS I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM BUT ITS KINDA SAD......MOST OF YOUR POEMS ARE SAD =( I HOPE YOU DOING BETTER AND REMEMBER IM HERE FOR YOU OK I LOVE YOU BYE
    ALWAYS NATALIE

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job. It was a little rocky at times but the meaning was great. But sad. But GREAT! -Sorry. I know I am a little weird but I love poetry. :)

    I give you a 5/5 because I can tell you put a lot of work into this and you did a goodjob.

    >black&&blue

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    You have left me here in my tears.
    You have gave me something to fear.
    How am i supposed to live with out you here.
    I will be surprised if I make it through this year.
    [I loved that stanza. Reminds me of my mum and me alot.]

    I thought it was a really sad poem, But yet again it was great hun. There's not a thing I would change. There's so much pure emotion in it and I love it. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, this was a weird one. The rhyme scheme was different, yet the flow was good. It was sad. Like most of your poetry have been. Hmm, well I hope things turn out for the best Nelle. You are a talented writer, but it's not nice reading where your inspiration comes from. I would like to see happier poetry from you.

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