Hmm, this was a weird one. The rhyme scheme was different, yet the flow was good. It was sad. Like most of your poetry have been. Hmm, well I hope things turn out for the best Nelle. You are a talented writer, but it's not nice reading where your inspiration comes from. I would like to see happier poetry from you.

I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

You have left me here in my tears.
You have gave me something to fear.
How am i supposed to live with out you here.
I will be surprised if I make it through this year.
[I loved that stanza. Reminds me of my mum and me alot.]

I thought it was a really sad poem, But yet again it was great hun. There's not a thing I would change. There's so much pure emotion in it and I love it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Good job. It was a little rocky at times but the meaning was great. But sad. But GREAT! -Sorry. I know I am a little weird but I love poetry. :)

I give you a 5/5 because I can tell you put a lot of work into this and you did a goodjob.

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HEY NELLE HOW YOU BEEN I MISS YOU I HAVENT TALKED TO YOU LATELY WELL ANYWAYS I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM BUT ITS KINDA SAD......MOST OF YOUR POEMS ARE SAD =( I HOPE YOU DOING BETTER AND REMEMBER IM HERE FOR YOU OK I LOVE YOU BYE
ALWAYS NATALIE