Playing Upon My Heartstrings

by Brokevalentine09   Jul 18, 2006


As I gave you my heart
open and bare
I was left to wonder
would you even care?

Would it go unnoticed?
Would you walk on by?
My heart was left open
scared and filled with sorrow.

Days into Weeks
Weeks into Months
Months into Years
and I was still here.

It went unnoticed
you walked on by
my heart was now closed
with tears in my eyes.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Well done, flawless piece. 5/5, Em

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    It went unnoticed
    you walked on by
    my heart was now closed
    with tears in my eyes.

    ^^amazing!!... 5/5.. and thanks for the comments.. i read your profile, and im here if you need any advice, and i hope i can help you...<3

  • 18 years ago

    by Suffering Soul

    I've been going through this over the past 2 years... amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Wow! I really like this. I like how uv done the rhyme scheme and kept it quite simple. It fits with the theme and doesn't monotonous.

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