by x-aLeX bAbe-x Jul 18, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
A smile is way to show how you feel towards someone, |
by LostForever
Its really good...well done! keep it up |
by brkendown
This is really good but i think if you put it into lines you know like god i cant think of the word soo sorry for get that! also you start the ph off the same way which is cool but its almost like your repeating the same thing in each ph. maybe if you but more details or emotsions into it i know thats hard but .. 4/5 |