Life

by hayley   Jul 18, 2006


Thinking the world is easy is wrong,
unless you want an easy one.
Witnessing pain makes you realise,
everything what you've got.
Those who never know the price of happiness,
will never be happy.
Those who witness the passing of time,
will be those who value time.
Those who respect their life,
will be those who are respected,
those who experience difficulty,
will be the ones who value success.

The world knows what i mean,
when they experience this.

Sorrow happens, hardship happens,
wallowing in self pity,
to hell with it.
Don't be scared, do it now,
after all i cannot forgive myself,
in what i forgave.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Witnessing pain makes you realise,
    everything what you've got.

    [I think you should say 'that' instead of 'what']

    The world knows what i mean,
    when they experience this.

    [Try to captalise your I's]

    I liked the start of this poem, but as it got to the end, It started to feel rocky. Keep it up though.

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That is a really good lesson in life. We will never know what true happiness is until we find out what true depression is. We could never know good if we didn't know evil. We need to know both sides of everything before we can know one. Well, that's the thought that came into my head when reading this poem. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by fayyad

    Exelent job keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This was a very unique poem. I liked it very much. Nicely done.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Hampson

    That is good i love it

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