Ths is soo good and so true keep up teh good work

That is good i love it

This was a very unique poem. I liked it very much. Nicely done.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Exelent job keep it up

That is a really good lesson in life. We will never know what true happiness is until we find out what true depression is. We could never know good if we didn't know evil. We need to know both sides of everything before we can know one. Well, that's the thought that came into my head when reading this poem. Good stuff.

Witnessing pain makes you realise,
everything what you've got.

[I think you should say 'that' instead of 'what']

The world knows what i mean,
when they experience this.

[Try to captalise your I's]

I liked the start of this poem, but as it got to the end, It started to feel rocky. Keep it up though.

Natalie``