So He speaks through me though I still sin.
He died for us so why can't we live for Him.
[Those lines were great!!]

It was a pretty good poem. I'm not really into God myself.. but yeah. It was still a great poem. I thought your rhymes were alright. They didn't seem too forced. Good job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow Chris, another amasing poem. You have a talent for writting inspirational, religious poetry. I liked the way you used such powerful words, it really gave the poem something special, great work.

--Steph