I like this poem. It is very well written. keep up the good work!

WOw! This was really sad. But it was so good. I loved it. I really like how you ended it. Really strong. This poem was filled with so much raw emotion, and sadly I can relate alot. Keep your head up hun. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I really like this, mainly because i can relate a lot to it it was very sad. It showed strong emotions, you let them pour out perfectly! Great job..Keep it up 5/5

I love the way how u illustrate the word pain in this poem! it's really good!