Wow i know whut thats like....i lost my mother to suicide last month and im seriously suicidal ever since i lost her

Awesome poem...it's cool that many emotions gos wild. keep writing:)

Awwww ben! hehe i love you ;)
Jena

Yet my eyes speak chapters

in my heart you will not die

[I absolutely loved these lines... You always seem to have a few lines that pop out to me]

I like the flow; You had a wonderful rhyming scheme here.. Great job.

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