Good job, I think you used "I" to many times. That's just my thought. Keep it up

I actually loved this Steph.

Awhile ago... My best friend Jessie.. and the guy I loved.. Mitch. They got together kinda.. But right in front of me. It hurt so much. And only just the other day I found out she was at his place again.. && even though I'm not in love with him anymore.. I was still just upset about it and kept thinking they'd done something.. Anyways. I thought you did great on this poem. Lots of true emotions and very easy for others to relate too. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I really liked the rhythm and flow of this poem. It was great. I liked alot of the expressions, also. Altogether, great poem! I don't think you should underestimate your own work, feelings and words speak more than you actually think. :D

I really like the flow and rhythm of this poem. Alot of the expressions were great. If it written with your own feelings and thoughts, then it can only be shown - and I could see that. Great!

Aww.. that was good.. i think you are taking that very calmly.. lol.. i would be very angry.. this poem contained so much emotion, it made a knot in my stomach.. you detailed it well and still leave it a bit of a mystery of how they hurt you last time..

But it happened once,
What if it happens again?
I dont think I could take that,
I cant handle that kind of thing,
^i feel that the last line of this stanza doesnt really fit, but its just my opinion..

nice job! keep up the great work! 5/5

And a poem for you is good... Nicely written; I've felt this way many times before.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5