Liberty

by Tiny Reader   Jul 18, 2006


Whilst walking along this distance
I've walked so often before
I witnessed a motion so simple
As a leaf fell to the floor.

The leaf was blown so swiftly
As no path was mapped out ahead
Its freedom so very apparant;
I'll follow the silent words it said.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    I love short poems with strong meanings in them. GREAT GREAT poem ....

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very tranquil, simple, and unique poem.

    The first stanza's flow is perfect, but the flow changes in the second stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Yup, A short poem.. but it was really giid. Well, atleast I thought so!

    I really liked how you added the details about the leaf. Very well worded too. Nothing I would change. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Short 'n' sweet.
    nice poem.
    I liked it
    ~Emah

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