by Lauren Waszkiewicz Jul 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The little girl looks out in the world, |
by Ixora
I can clearly see why this is your favorite...this poem is beautiful and tragic. you're a very talented poet. |
I loved the way you wrote it |
by Biscuit
Great job, i remember this poem, it definately is a much better ending, it feels more finished now and it all fits together very well, a wonderful idea (i know i sed that last time!). thanks for taking note of my previous comment and for letting me know about the edit, definately a worthwile improvement :) |
The little girl looks out in the world, |
by Amberinaa
Wow. i loved it especially the whole paper wings thing. thought it was very creative and very well written. the rhymes were pretty good but coulda been a little bit better. but besides that it was beautiful |