Wow this is the best outta all ur poems...very nice flows well..but look at the last line..i think its worded wrong..ne wayz...5/5 this was awesome!

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

thnx fer the comment

Omg i love this

Snap...I like it...hehe...

Wowo niice styel..keep it up...excellent piece.

Lissa

Good poem but what were his emotions that led him to this...again more detail..but even without ur poem is rly good.

Lissa

Love this one well done!