Hmm. I'm not sure about the last lines on every single stanza. Except the first stanza. That entire stanza was perfect:

I've had friends that loved me,
and friends that were so kind,
but now they have disappeared,
somewhere along the hands of time.

Mm. I do like the "hands of time" thing for some reason.

Nice try, but in my humble, no-good opinion, needs work. It's between "fair" and "good," with the potential for "excellent."