Comments : A Fragile Dream

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Well done, heartz! very nice,a nd I liked it a bunch... Keep it up, hun! 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Shatter

    I like this its awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shatter

    I like this its awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Sorry it's taken me so long to send you a comment chickadee, but i hope to make it worth your while, this poem = fantabloish!

    the line about the homework unfinished, haha its so me, I can totally relate to it. your imagery and connection to your work is evident in the word choice, for such a young writter, you show more passion then most oldder poets.

    And I also want to congraulate you on making 300 poems, thats quite a massive portflio you have going on here girly. Keep up your passion,

    Now on a personal note...HELLO! lol how are you?

    Lol Poetry wise 5/5=]

    Love Always Jenn