by Andrew Dorsey Jul 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He was in pain for nobody cared |
I liek it but its just he starts out in pain what were his eyes liek, what did the darkness aroudn him do..think of adding more detail to make it even deep....i still like this style. Keep it up..cant wait to read more!!! |
I would care... |
Aww how sad...thnx fer ur comments...i like this..very deep keep writing..ur very good... |