The Fight

by Andrew Dorsey   Jul 18, 2006


He was in pain for nobody cared
if he was lost no one would be scared
he had the knife at his throat that night
tonight would finally end this mental fight
a girl loved but she didnt love him back
he couldnt find the reason to live, which he lacked
the knife went to his throat, he felt a sharp pain
soon he'd be gone, but with what to gain
he fell to the floor, his body went numb
some people would consider this act dumb
he saw the blood and started to grin
at that moment, he felt the world spin
his vision went black, he saw no more
he lay there, lifeless on the floor
if no nobody cared, why should he
he was finally gone, his spirit was free

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I liek it but its just he starts out in pain what were his eyes liek, what did the darkness aroudn him do..think of adding more detail to make it even deep....i still like this style. Keep it up..cant wait to read more!!!

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by iMfAlInGaPaRt

    I would care...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Aww how sad...thnx fer ur comments...i like this..very deep keep writing..ur very good...

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~ aka sarah