Aww how sad...thnx fer ur comments...i like this..very deep keep writing..ur very good...

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~ aka sarah

I would care...

I liek it but its just he starts out in pain what were his eyes liek, what did the darkness aroudn him do..think of adding more detail to make it even deep....i still like this style. Keep it up..cant wait to read more!!!

Lissa