WOw Noni. That was REALLY good. I'm stunned and speachless. I've only done two of these so far.. and to me they seem pretty hard. But your one just flows so well and the rhyming and vocab were great! I also really liked the title, I thought it was really eye catching. Keep up the great work!! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

That was really great... I like the different style... I might have to try one like that! It was fun to read, and it was a great poem too. As are all of your poems! Wo.Ot!!!! 5/5

Ravyn

Finally I've read so many attempts at this poem which weren't bad i guess.
But this was perfect.
Awesome work Noni.
Lovein it
Emah
5/5

Knives surrounding my every thought
As the rain pounds against my solemn dreams
There's a thunderstorm inside my heart
Where blood flows freely down my
streams

[I didn't much like the last line 'streams'...it just didn't seem to fit]

Darkness and light begins to gamble
For the right of death and forever pain

[Nor did I like this line, though there's no just reason]

But the rest of it, I did like and it was a very creative way of going. Nicely done.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow. Very talanted you are Noni. This poem was awesome. I really enjoyed it. I got great images from it aswell.

This poem is awsome! i like the way you used your pwords in there! and the flow was not that bad! you just have the talent! where did you get your talent from!!!!!!???

keep it up!

Wow.. i really like this poem.. good work :)