Short and to the point. It had a nice flow very nicely written. I related to it a lot. 5\5 take care. Love you to comment on any of mine.

Wonderful little truths of ones soul! I loved it! keep working!

Good job. thanks for the comment. umm one suggestion...can you possible put it in like stanzas...you know like seperate sentences. it will flow better :) good job again!