This poem seems to be very emotional. It mixes up alot of emotions into one though. but in all it was a good poem. I hope you don't really have those feelings though.

-Darrin

(Sorry I didn't realize you wanted a certain one, so I just did two)

Wow, this is really sad...I remember feeling like this...Doll I really hope things turn up for you. Remember, there are people that love you.

Take care

xDarkSuicidex

Aw wOw. That's so sad!! Sooo good though. It was like you were actually just sitting in front of me pouring your heart out. Really loved it. And I can relate alot too. Keep it up && smile. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow, that was such a sad poem. You really do put a lot of emotion into your stuff. The first stanza was a bit odd. The lines kept getting longer and longer. The rest of the poem was great though. Awesome stuff.

This is a very sad poem. Even though the rhymes were somewhat predictable you had a good flow going.
The subject isn't all that new, but in this category what is? Thanks for sharing.

Sad. Full of emotions. Great style. The flow was great.

^^That is why i gave you 5/5.

Excellent writer.

>black&&blue

Interesting poem, certainly not your best, but good all the same. I think the first stanza is great, but the poem gradually fades into not being so great nearer the end. Even not being your best, this is still a good poem.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow i really like this. i can relate to this one defiantly. amazing job.

Wow. I loved the line

I'm not helpless but I am hopeless

with that I can identify.
You have a great talent for expressing strong emotions. Keep it up.