Comments : My man turns to stone

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    This is a very nicely written poem. I enjoyed it very much

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is really an amazing poem indeed

    Distance made my man stone
    Our love faded away, and my heart was thrown
    He lived in his own mind, while I waited
    Soon I realized that love and hate are both related
    Teach me the art of breaking one's heart
    Close your eyes, the darkness of love is about to start
    One by one, all the candles are blown away
    And the imperfection of our desires are here to stay...

    i swear...i just loved these two stanzas a lot...simply took my breath away...u r too good yaar

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Best things in life comes only when you have the patience to wait for it...But often waiting for the best thing,we lose so many better things in life...I understand ur words..the feelings hidden behind those words...I dont understand why life teaches us things the hard way....Either we must be stupid or the life itself must be stupid....

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Magnificent poem... So much emotion... So much of pain... Very well written my friend!

  • 18 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This poem represents my feeling every lines as if knows exactly what am I feeling...This poem is perfectly written. Keep it up