by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Second poem since November... Tell me what you think... |
Nice poem but i did notice in your very last line you have "your not alone" i think it should be "you're not alone" maybe wrong but not sure. keep up the great writing |
All i can say is wow... this poem is amazing! the emotion is strong and true. i can relate... you did an awsome job at making it so people can relate to the emotions, most definitly keep it up |
by Libby M
That was a truly good poem... a lot of thoughts and emotions |
by Nelle
Awwwwwwwww omg that was soooo cute, and sweet! I can Definitely relate to this a lot! For it being your second one since November it was amazing!! Greatt job 5/5 |