HAHA wow i never had that problem with my mom well i had worse thats so funny I didnt know it was about beer

Damn u, u fool me haha.. I am like ooh no, here anotha sad poem.. All suddenly, u are so smart and getting eveyone so lost.. This is hella funny and u are so creative!!!

Very creative good job...5/5

Ahh. when i went to comment i saw that my friend raychel had made a comment.

small world.
ha.

this was quite a poem. setting them up for the fall. ahh, but isnt that what comedy is about?

love ya lots,
~sore

R.O.L.F!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NICE WORK!

10/10

MAN UR AWSOME ...

I must admit that I didn't like this piece as a whole, but the last two lines saved it. I think you could've done more with this piece, but I did love the ending, it was a total surprise, believe me.

Brad