You

by twisted reality   Jul 19, 2006


You were my light.
You were everything to me.
You were all i thought about.
You were there when things got bad.
You knew how to comfort me.

"You were" are the key words.

Just like "You were" who I loved.
And, "You were" the one who made my heart skip a beat whenever I heard your name.
Then you found her.
And gave me up.

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  • 18 years ago

    by kelS;

    Oh myy. this poem just makes me sadd but its really good it has a good flow and i like the style alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Awww! This Is Really Sad! I'm Always here If You Need Someone To Talk To! Just Private Message Me! I Share Like The Same Problems As You We Could Maybe Both Help Eachother Out! 5/5 Fantastic Poem
    Love,
    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    A very original style I like it allot very very relatable
    Keep up the good work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked the way you threw in the line

    You were" are the key words.

    It really helped to turn the poem around for the ending. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I know how that feels. That was such a great poem. Short, but still great. The flow was really good too. It was also very relatable.
    5/5

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