Aww, That was kinda cute. Tehe.

I thought it was a lovely poem. Made me smile a little. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

A very strong imagination. 5/5... I like it alot good job
~Kyra~

A very strong imagination. 5/5... I like it alot good job
~Kyra~

It is nice poem.

Beautifully written. The rhyme works well-the flow is on target. Your word choice for the poem is perfect, I love it! This is a very unique kind of poem, which is good----Keep it up! 5/5

A perfect imagery poem, it is so cute.I really liked the flow of the poem. great job

I wrote on kind of like this called "Sky Dance"... I thought that yours was very beautiful, and I liked it very much. 5/5

Ravyn.

XDarkSuicidex --
This was a really good poem! The flow was perfect, even if it was one long stanza. I may consider breaking it up, if I were you. And maybe even expanding it? My favorite part was ::
Look at them now,
They show their promenade,
Dramatizing their every move,
Across the floor they made.

That was really good. 'Promenade' isn`t a word that you really see too often, especially in poetry. It was great, wonderful job. 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Hey that was great!
lol ive got one sorta alonbg the same lines but not as good
keep the great work comine
bye!

This poem was rather well written. In some places I had no idea what you were talking about with all the dances and everything, but it was still good. Great write. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

I like this poem It seems upbeat and light hearted. It gives you a good feeling.

I like how you made this a little more fun then the rest of your poems, its amazing, poems that invite the beauty of nature and keep its beauty are hard to come by...

keep it up!! (great Jb)

Bri

THIS POEM READS LIKE A MASTERPIECE!!!
The flow is spot on

I didn't enjoy how you changed the stars into the word you as though you were talking to them, the transition just seemed off with it, but I'll admit the poem in itself was cute. More of something you would tell a child and it wa sa bit mystical.

Wow. Another nicely done nature poem. This one aswell as the other one captureed great images. I liked the dancing parts. It was excillent.

A gentle and childlike poem I think.
The four lines "They show their promenade,
Dramatizing their every move,
Across the floor they made.
Show us your masquerade,"
made the poem for me, they gave great images.
The last four lines however came across a little cheesy and somewhat spoilt the ending for me I'm afraid.
Keep writing.

'Across the floor they made.
Show us your masquerade,'

It kinda through me off that rhyme scheme you had there. Using the word promenade was kinda weird as well... it sounded like you tried a little to hard to expand you're vocabulary. I liked the point of the poem though ^^