I know ive said this to like all of your poems, but i seriosuly LOVE your writing!

your sooo good at putting emotion into words!

and im always here to listen.
u have my sn

Holy moly. This was really good. Honestly! I usually pick my favorite parts, but I liked every stanza in this poem so much! There was so much emotion in this and it was great. I just hope you don't really feel this way. Keep up the great work though! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Great poem...hang in there for me

Well, i loved this poem. I can definitely relate a lot to it! it was great in ever way..I hope you don't reallly feel like this, and if you do i'm telling you now, i know how you feel so i'm here if ya need me!! xoxo

Awww that's such a sad poem. You know, the more you look for happiness, the less you will notice it's around. The best advice is to stop looking, and when it comes to you, it will sweep you off your feet. Take care and thanks for reading :)

Aww that is sad. I feel like that all the time; I never talk about anything but I really DO want to talk about things. I don't know. People usually call me a really complicated person. Very sad hun but a great piece.

>black&&blue

THis is a great poem...Keep up the great work. I've read a lot of your work and I absolutely love it. Keep it up for me, You're part of my favorites now. =)

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

You are such a great writer. i feel your pain. i can relate to this so much. keep writing and keep up the good work. your awesome.

luv always
beth
-xox-

Omg wow i love it. it has so much emotion put in it. i kno how u feel i can relaly relate to it. this poem has amazing word choice and flow and rhythm.. its soo good. ur talented keep writing. thanx for commenting on a few of my poems. 5/5
take care
angie

An excellent piece. These heartfelt emotions have been put to paper beautifully and the following stanza stood out to me the most…

"I don`t know how to deal,
I`m just going with the flow,
But I can`t hold on much longer,
Whether I can last-I do not know"

…If it makes you feel any better- I get that feeling all of the time! But its reality and we all get through the toughest bits in life when we persevere. Lasting is something no one will experience, after all- when is the end? And what end will it be?

I am obliged to have read this poem- it’s one of those that make me WANT to think and get me questioning life and its attributes.
Any who, it was a pleasure reading, very well done and keep writing!

God bless,
-Elysium.

Hey this is really good, perfect choice of words hunni _xX...Xx_

Aw, hey, you can always come to me if you seriously need someone. I may be a stranger, but I promise I"ll be nice.

Now, I really liked this poem because you seem to write on the same topics I do and so I can relate really well.. I'm not sure what to say about this poem though..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Thankks for the comment/votee.. i completely understanddd//relate to this poem. and if u ever need someone to listen im here for you

5/5. I can relate a lot to this poem. It's so true for many people, even the people we all think that are truly happy... We're never the same people on the inside as we are on the outside... Anyway, very good. Very descriptive. My favorite stanza was:

"My life is falling to pieces,
Right in front of my eyes,
Everything is heading downhill,
Every time I tell my lies,"

It was a very good beginning. Keep writing!!

~BJ~

I know exactly what you're saying. It's like your poem is about me in a way. Every day I feel worse and like my whole world is crashing down. You're an amazing person and I do genuinely care. I'm always here for and you can talk to me anytime, day or night. Stay strong!!!!