by Weeping Wolf Jul 19, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Japan |
This is outstanding, almost like a song lyric--you get better with every poem, I swear.This speaks to me of wanting to get away, to start a new life, a place where we can be who we always have wanted to be.It speaks of loss and sadness, friendship and love.It says so much.And you have written this one beautlfully, Layla, it is like a smooth easy song I have already felt in my soul.I really feel this one.Always remember.Always follow your dreams.Never stop believing anything is possible. |
by JL
Wow, I love this, especially the refrain. beautifully written. |