Awwwwwwwwwww that was soooo sweet, i can definitely relate to this alot! you're a great great writer babe...if i havent told you enough times yet lol! I love all of your poems..they all tell a great story! 5/5

U have so much talent your r a truely amazing writer, i hope u get these seen by some publisheer or someone soon xoxo bye bye

U have a way with words. u word every word so beautfully l0l =p that was great l0ved it all. keep em cming. a very touching piece xx

Wow... I can feel how in love you are and how lucky you are to have found the one you love. Great write. 5/5

Beautifully written! Your word choice is perfect and you did an amazing job with the flow-It can be hard with such long lines---I love the rhyme-It really made the poem that much better-- The imagery in it and the descriptions made the poem extremely ''wow''-- Great write! I enjoyed reading it :-)

5/5 Keep it up!

Instead of "never another" at the end of the second line in the last stanza, I'd suggest "never any other". It adds another syllable that I think the line is missing. Just my personal opinion though, ignore it at your will. :)

Loved it!

I loved every word of this! It was really sweet, well done! 5/5 Keep up the great work!

Lovely poem. Great rhymes that flowed well. Such sweet sentiment radiates through your words that this poem leaves me with a warm and fuzzy feeling.
Wonderful writer.

Amazing poetry. That is really very impressive. I like the long lines, they really make the poem effective. Well penned.

Peace. [Sole]

That was adorable hunn. I love it. I shall read it to my boyfriend later on. He will like it too. It reminds me of him and I. Excellent job. It is a great poem that describes two people in love. :)

>black&&blue

Wow...it was a Nice Read...my favourite lines are "I'll always feel blessed that you had come into my life,
Cause you know how to keep me warm & safe; out of strife."..these lines were just soo perfect =D=D

Like always your poems are so great.
you have great words

This was a good poem, I enjoyed reading it. It was really cute!

-Taylor

Nice poem... It had excellent flow and was nicely written. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Oh! That is SO cute! Lol. I love how passionate you were about wording the poem. Very well done yet again. xoxo

¤ Samantha ¤

Wowwwwwwwwwwwww
very romantic

Woah ! this is an amazing poem ! You've got some great skill :) Keep it up !

Wonderful! absolutely wonderful!
this poem has something to do with me..I can relate to this one. every line and every stanza..except the part about kissing.lol, hvn't got my first kiss yet =P

very sweet work honey. I love reading your poems esp your love poems,...they're full of emotions and they appeal to me..I'm known as miss emotional,hehe!

I love the poem honey. keep up your love poems!hehe
Love You
NemO xxxxxxxx

I like very good way of expressing yourself