Comments : The Darkness Consuming

  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    5/5 suh excellent work! never stop writing!!!
    TELL ME MORE TELL ME MORE about this poem
    so gorgeous and i love itDarkness consumes me...
    my favorite stanza was this ::
    Darkness consumes me,
    Bringing forth my rage,
    The cup is clinking,
    Upon my cage.

    i love it..
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by Big hersh

    This was really good i love the seriousness in it