by Chris Jul 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I walk this narrow path |
This is a VERY EXCELLENT POEM! I loved every word! Keep up the great work! i expect more coming from you! 5/5 great job! |
by Natalie
Aww! This was really sad. I really liked the ending though.. I thought it brought the whole poem together. Keep it up! 5/5 |