Sorry

by Sita   Jul 19, 2006


I feel so lost
I wish I didn't live
I'm covered in this frost
If only you could forgive

I know I did you wrong
I feel extremely bad
And this i wont prolong
Sorry I pissed off your dad

I'm with you everyday
Yet your so far away
Much to my dismay.
It hurts for me to say
I'm sorry that I betrayed.

OK its not finished yet, I'm not too big on the ending. please vote or comment if you like.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    The poem is good b'coz you said what you felt in your heart....thats really nice...take care and keep smiling always...

  • 18 years ago

    by ...Rýáñ...

    Hey..

    This is a really good poem..
    and I really like the rhyming sequence which gives the end a climax and made me want to read more..

    Really good poem

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