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by Vic Jul 19, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
Highway walker Eyes glued down Face unmoving A stagnant frown Life speeds forward Yet at a dead end Lonely walker No warmth of a friend Step after step Moving on yet not Fast-forward pace Though state is at stop He's lost to the world And he's lost his own Walking, chasing forth Heavy figure of stone Weary feet carry on Unknown destination Speeding environment Stuck moving slow-motion Control is broken All senses fail Stay on the track Of an invisible trail Lonesome walker whose lost his way To him all is lost In a dead-end Highway...
by Amber
Your very descriptive in this poem i can definatly picture it happening ..great use of words keep it up ..check out some of mine
by iheartu
That was great, and the way you described it created a really effective image for me! Great work :)
