Powerful. It was really intense. Some great thoughts posed behind this one. Loved how it ended. That was powerful. Really enjoyed this one. Second stanza was cool along with the third one. Talent is apparent. Really that was....cool and just well done for the thoughts that it provoked and just the overall style of it. The words could have been a little bit more pointed but nice job.
~Faith-less

Hey Tim, bra that's a mad ass poem, real deep and all. peace out bro 5/5

Hey Tim, bra that's a mad ass poem, real deep and all. peace out bro 5/5

Hey Tim, bra that's a mad ass poem, real deep and all. peace out bro 5/5