This one REALLY made me laugh. That is a really cute poem. I love how all of your poems are so..happy. =D Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Haha this is a funny poem...it made me laugh!!haha nice!! hey we have all gone through that before!!haha

This is hilarious. The fact that you pulled off so well writing a poem about such a topic is fantastic. Great job. :)

LMAO! Oh my gosh! Great poem! It really made me laugh even though I'm going through a lot. Keep it up! 5/5

Samantha

LMFAO that is great .... too funny! you have some of the best poems I have read...all subjects at that ;) 5/5

HAHAH!! Lovely.. Haaa. I liked that poem. That made me giggle. :]

Lmfao!! Oh, God. You're great at writing funny poems. xD

This one was hilarious. Taha! And the rhyming was great too. =P ..Great job on this one. Def. put a smile on my face, again. Tehe. 5/5

Natalie``

Oh what a heinous crime
I swear it isn't mine --Nice rhyming
what will I do?
there's a floater in the loo! - What the H*ll is a floater or loo?
I didn't make a fuss
just tutted, gave a flush -- Gave a flush?
it disappeared in the end
but still came back from round the bend
I roll my eyes and stare at the floor
Oh no knocking on the door--Oh no, there's something knocking on the door
I want to run, I need to hide
no one will be on my side.
Quick, stuff more paper down --why?
this time it will surely drown
swirling, twirling, round and round
back it pops without a sound
help me please what can I do?
there is a floater in the loo! --What's loo??

Ok, I'd really like you to contact me and explain this poem to me... I just didn't get it. There for, I can't rate it. But the flow was excellent... And I'm sure it does make sense. XD

xDarkSuicidex -No Rate-

Haha lmao very good keep writing

So gross but so funny. Jpoet*