Anniversary of Two Hearts

by Darien   Jul 19, 2006


Anniversary of Two Hearts

Patience is a quality he has developed
Waiting for his adorable sweet heart
Dressed to a tee in a pin-striped suit
Exchanging compliments as they depart

Soothing love songs in a hushed ride
A tranquil evening of dinner and dance
Hearts complete the lifeline they share
A memorable night of fervent romance

Intertwined fingers, webs of passion
Setting a lovely atmosphere to celebrate
An anniversary of love and commitment
Faithfully, six months since their first date

Daunting, she beckons him to the dance floor
Nervous yet confident, he makes his way
sweet symphony's of an enchanting tune
moving gracefully, like dancers of ballet

Slow passionate kisses their lips share
As the youth of this night gradually gets old
A romantic ballad this magical night created
One of passionate love and a story to be told...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again, this was very sweet and romantic, and i enjoyed reading this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    Ehh i dont know i dont really like this, but it is good. probably cause you used such big words and i have no idea what they mean. lol im stupid. but yeah you did do a great job using big words and differents words.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderfully done. I especilly like your choice of title.

    great work

    peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    I loved the story of the poem and the set up. one word of advice is to add more punctuation. it just makes it easier to read. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Campbell

    This tells a story of its own-i like it

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