Darien --
This was a great poem. I think that the rhymes you chose were well thought out ;; they weren`t so simple, as most rhymes are. The flow throughout the poem was perfect. The poem held a lot of detail, so it was easy to imagine. It was a great poem. 5/5

Samantha Hollywood

A very gentle, delicate poem, beautiful words and a beautiful picture :) and enjoyable read :)

-biscuit-

I love this poem. It was amazing, and well written. I love; love poems. And this one is amazing. Great Job.

Also - Thanks for the comment and tip about my song. =)

This tells a story of its own-i like it

I loved the story of the poem and the set up. one word of advice is to add more punctuation. it just makes it easier to read. 5/5

Wonderfully done. I especilly like your choice of title.

great work

peace
shobhana

Ehh i dont know i dont really like this, but it is good. probably cause you used such big words and i have no idea what they mean. lol im stupid. but yeah you did do a great job using big words and differents words.

Again, this was very sweet and romantic, and i enjoyed reading this.