Lust or Love?

by Dv0ted   Jul 19, 2006


You're sent on my pillow comforts me whilst i try to sleep,
Knowing i have you leaves me no reason to weep.
Although falling asleep is hard when your not next to me,
Dreaming about you will soon set me free.
It's a mystery how we came together.
Lust or love?
I wish it could last for ever

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    I love this little poem, short but sweet 5/5 hun x

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I agree with Noni. Although it's a cute little poem. Just try to make it a little longer with more feelings within it. It'd be great then. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxpinkxxribbonsxx

    Thats very good all my poems are short aswell 5/5 keep up the good work

    ^^PICKLE^^

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start, try to make it longer

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