Good start, try to make it longer

Thats very good all my poems are short aswell 5/5 keep up the good work

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I agree with Noni. Although it's a cute little poem. Just try to make it a little longer with more feelings within it. It'd be great then. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I love this little poem, short but sweet 5/5 hun x