Comments : The Childhood Of My Dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This was really touchy, i could so easily relate myself with those feelings, i hv been thro it and i m still somewhere living in my childhood.....very nicely expressed indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shady

    Dear , i cant sleep the night 's because of you , i want you , want you . and i love love love you verry much , look. all i want from you to think ,lonly ok , i think you still know whi i am , ! please ?? give me a damn chance to love you alone . all alone , i love you if you say . yes or no ,you are every think to me you are the nair that i breath every day . im writing these words and its coming from inside my poor heart . my poor heart is full of loves . this loves is you . yes you . please for give me cause i cant stop loving you .

  • 18 years ago

    by shady

    Every time when i see you i see the moon infront of me . your picture in my mind , i love it
    alaa_a_s2002: in the morninig and the evning ever day every minute you are in my mind ,, belive it , belive this words which my heart wrotte it
    alaa_a_s2002: please give me a chance to love you
    alaa_a_s2002: i well be waiting your answer , az soon az posible , think well
    alaa_a_s2002: with love

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very sweet and very true, missing the past. We always wanted to grow up but we grew up too fast. A Great job, in your last stanza though "has gone bye" it should be "has gone by". A great job very sad in a happy way and well written.