Comments : Locked Up

  • 18 years ago

    by Brandy

    Hey i understand what you are feeling i am there too your family will think it is all their fault buut somehow turn it against ou making you feel worse, your friends say they understand or that they want to but once they know they act like somethings different they treat you like a freak or something they don't understand and your problems scare them and telling anyone else is out of the question because if your friends and family won't understnad no one else will either but i'm here if you need to talk or anything boogybrat_02220@yahoo.com
    or
    i_am_me_all_day_long_so_live_with_it@hotmail.com

    by the way i'm brandy

  • 18 years ago

    by kia

    Thats really good. Really well written. 5\5. I know exactly what your talking about. Those feelings are really close to home. Related to every word. Take care. Would love you to comment and rate any of mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem, hun---In some places the flow is a little off, but the emotion you put into it is great! Try breaking the poem up into stanzas and that may help with the flow thing a bit- Keep it up and stay strong---

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem, hun---In some places the flow is a little off, but the emotion you put into it is great! Try breaking the poem up into stanzas and that may help with the flow thing a bit- Keep it up and stay strong---

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Sorry...I hit the submit button twice-- =P

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I LOVE THIS POEM! lol that was amazing and i know exactly what you are talking about.sometimes i want to juss pack my bags and leave my house cuz my parents really have no idea who i am.but i have no where to go.but stay strong babe! and keep writing. you have some T-A-L-E-N-T lol