Light dark (daimante)

by Ashleigh Skye   Jul 19, 2006


Light
Pure, powerful
dancing, sparkling, glowing
starlight, moonlight, shadows, nightfall,
creeping, consuming, pouncing,
menacing, uncontrollable,
darkness.
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this is my first try to plz be nice, if you dont like it plz tell me how I can improve.. thanx a zillion

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  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    I like it, good work

    love sammi x

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I've written a couple of poems in this style, theres something about them that really draws me in.
    This one is no exception. You crafted a beautiful piece.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Love it. Like the way it flows from light to dark both in words and meaning.
    Excellent job 5/5

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