Sun is always bright & sunshine
Never dies
It gives us the hope
A glimpse of paradise
Again with my wounded heart I'm trying to stand tall
Are you feeling something my dear, can you hear my final call?
your whole poem is good.
These lines I specialyl like.
you did good job in this poem
5/5

I really liked this poem, it has a different style of writing, and I love your ending. Keep it up.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Oh... very well written..
I love the hints of pain in this poem...
nice work..

Much love,
Ipsita

Hey darl a veru touhing piece intresting piece of words. thank u for ur kind words on my poem. meant alot to me xx

Fabulous poem....Never read anything like that....The style,the emotions,the hope...beautiful...keep writing....

This was an interesting poem and in a good way, I've never read a poem like this. The rhyminbg was beautiful as was the poem. A lovely dedication of love. Keep it up, its really fantastic.

and thanks for the comment :)