To Emliana and a Suffering Soul (two Epitaphs)

by RetroRavey   Jul 19, 2006


To a suffering soul.

Every moment is saddening,
Missing you, forever more.
But when God closed my window,
For you he opened a door.

To Emliana

Sister dearest, child of the world,
I miss you darling, my precious girl.
So rest in peace, from the very start,
And watch over me with your warm heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Beautiful job! Loved the first stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw! wOw. This was very sad. But really good. I've never tried to do a Epitaph, They actually seem really hard to write. But yours just makes it look easy. Very nice work! Keep it up! =) 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Vulnerant Omnia, Ultima Necat

    These r really good ravyn

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