Vision

by Chris   Jul 19, 2006


Take a look through my eyes
Walk a mile in my shoes
See the sky full of lies
And the ocean full of the truth
Take a look in my mind
See how everything moves
My lyrics stem from design
As colorful as the blues
or as ground breaking as jazz was
when it was brand new
I know that u can stand through
All the pressure and pain
Just put together the reasons for thunder,
weather and rain
It's kind of insane
how everyone sees things differently
maybe everyones crazy
No, I just think its me..
cant you see...?
take a good look through my eyes
and see the vision I'm seeing past all the
hate and demise.
I cant lie when I'm writing down all my lyrical rhymes
Because I'm past that phase of hiding what goes
on in my mind...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Well written poem Chris. A wonderful and inspirational write. Looking through someone else's eyes and seeing things from their persepective is one of the hardest things for people. There are so many closed minded people out there, and they really need to just open their eyes and accept the light. Well done my friend. Keep on writing and God Bless.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    "cant" should be "can't".

    Very good poem. I like the mixed flow to it - how it follows a very sporadic pattern of rhyming. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I enjoyed your poem. Although the rhythm seemed to become a little disjointed I felt this contributed to the theme of the poem well.